Naming Them

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Jun 27, 2006.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    E239F squats by the murky pond
    trailing his twisted toes
    through the shards of sunlight
    and fractured ripple.

    His ease is of
    the common weave of grass.

    Close his family clusters,
    mirrors of him.
    It is only in the fall
    that they scar their insignia
    into the flesh of the heavens,
    picking up the pieces of
    broken cloud and returning them
    to the stubborn southern sky.

    Farther out in the pond
    C713 takes a bow
    and goes under.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    pretty good man. I'm guessing it's about geese? Birds anyways...

    "His ease is of
    the common weave of grass"

    beautiful. :)
     
  3. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    You got it
     

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