The Yellow Walls of Stone Gardens

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Aug 6, 2004.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    the fountains are quiet
    in the stone gardens.
    a summer is sleeping on your fragile shoulders.
    the fields are quick blue diamonds,
    black like earth,
    transparent as shade.





    (the falling of silence like our falling)
     
    ripple23, Aug 6, 2004
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  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    short and descriptive... this seems to form almost a single image in the mind I could almost meditate to; I like it. nice job! :)
     
    fulmah, Aug 6, 2004
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  5. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    well thanks.
     
    ripple23, Aug 8, 2004
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  7. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I agree with fulmah.
    Love the first two lines....
     
    KittenX, Aug 9, 2004
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