A Night in the Clouds

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by nouronion, Jul 16, 2006.

  1. nouronion

    nouronion Member

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    Can you define ones poetic endeavor
    or their constant yearning to stay high forever
    I'm in a spiritual mood
    I wanna be the earth spinning around

    around & around & up & down

    along the axis of life
    that revolves around the clouds
    when the sun goes down
    our inspiration found
    in an empty golden bottle
    complete euphoria
    in a cloud of white smoke
    higher and higher
    thoughts come from the sun and tickle my brain
    which is shooting out in all directions

    I wont define this endeavor
    my constant yearning for life.
    stuck to travel through my brain
    (and soon the world)
     
  2. dirty_boots

    dirty_boots Member

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    Wow I can really connect with that. I think I kinda took my own meaning for it though. I really like it. Well done ! It reminds me of when I was a little kid, whenever something was bothering me I used to always wish I was sitting up on a cloud away from everyone and in complete peace ahh the memories :D
     
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