Hey guys, I'm looking for some feedback on this song I made. It's a dancy, poppy sort of song. Actually, it reminds me of Beck, lol. Anyway, don't judge the lyrics too harshly . It's supposed to be a fun song, and they're pretty much just there so I have something to sing. Anyway, here it is: www.myspace.com/incredibledancing It's called "Orange Juice." Any comments/criticisms would be very much appreciated.
I think it seems pretty cool. Not the type of music I would normally listen to but it’s still good ! Kinda reminds me of beck or something like that too in a way. Oh and yeah do post the lyrics, that would rock.
Thanks for the replies guys. Um, the "lyrics" are embarrassingly bad, but whatever here they are: Playin' with my switchblade 24 hours a day People on the 3rd floor All dressed in black look down on me People on the 3rd floor Dressed in black look down on me There's only one thing I can Say to kill my sanity It's orange juice, baby Orange juice, baby It's just orange juice, baby It's just orange juicy, baby yeah People on the 3rd floor All dressed in black look down on me There's only one thing I can Say to keep my sanity The people on the 3rd floor Dressed in black look down on me There's only one thing I can Say to cure insanity There's orange juice, baby It's just orange juice, baby Orange juice, baby It's just orange juice, baby yeah Orange juice, baby Leave my orange juice, baby... Leave my orange juice, baby, alone
