i kinda like this and was wondering what everyone else thought... memories have been on my mind lately, listening to some songs that bring back lots of emotions and trying to organize my pictures certainly makes me think of how everything has been and how everything changed and how i am now.. this is what came out of it a couple of days ago in the early morning.... --------- chasing memories in my mind like trying to hold sand in my hand harder to grasp the thought than in actuality the simplicity of the situation astounds me how such a thought, distant memory could talke hold and become my present waking dream imagination runs rapid wild w/ accusations and assumptions easy to believe and so hard to let go paranoia sinks in takes hold steals the breath from your lungs black out fear of everything and yet nothing needless, false light shatters and hope soon to return the air to your shattered brain summer skies open fire beneath a desire thick skin turned soft easy to let me in shatter the fear and kiss the scars nothing is quite as it seems
i think your wording is beautiful. i love the realtion to memories being sand that seeps from your fingers.