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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by indian~summer, Jul 27, 2006.

  1. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    i kinda like this and was wondering what everyone else thought...
    memories have been on my mind lately, listening to some songs that bring back lots of emotions
    and trying to organize my pictures certainly makes me think of how everything has been and how everything changed and how i am now..
    this is what came out of it a couple of days ago in the early morning....
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    chasing memories in my mind
    like trying to hold sand in my hand
    harder to grasp the thought
    than in actuality
    the simplicity of the situation
    astounds me
    how such a thought, distant memory
    could talke hold
    and become my present
    waking dream

    imagination runs rapid
    wild w/ accusations
    and assumptions
    easy to believe
    and so hard to let go

    paranoia sinks in
    takes hold
    steals the breath
    from your lungs
    black out
    fear of everything
    and yet nothing
    needless, false
    light shatters and
    hope soon to return
    the air to your shattered brain

    summer skies
    open fire
    beneath a desire
    thick skin turned soft
    easy to let me in
    shatter the fear
    and
    kiss the scars

    nothing is quite as it seems
     
  2. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

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    i think your wording is beautiful. i love the realtion to memories being sand that seeps from your fingers.
     
  3. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    thanks :)
     
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