A risk I'm willing to take

you are a risk I'm willing to take
though you crown me
with your spikey thorns of something
called romance
until the bitter end

and your paranoid friends

love is a risk, as well as a cage
a risk I'm willing to take
a risk I'm willing, yearning to take
for your wicked self
and my unsatiable pleasure

your lemonade skies is where I fly
and your crystal clear mind
after hours
your butterfly drunkenness is what makes me hungry
for a risk

I'm willing to take
​

 

A nice definition for romance, it's only a risk, a game of luck, you can't establish a logic to it or control it to make it work!

 

I enjoyed that quite a bit bird.

 

Definitley one of your best. I can almost see this being part of song!

 

*sigh*

i remember feeling just what your poem describes; intense excitment for something you feel so anxious and nervous about; as well as sure and hopeful for. love it!

 

hi this is great ,i felt this...after reading...

we all have needs and taking risks
is the feeling to be human, to test ourselves
to try new things, to love ,to just live.
but beware life has the down side also
so the risks are choices.....to choose
which risks... is the real risk....

thank you for peom, keep writing
it tests your beliefs........
lovenpeace form saff.

 

at last, something i can relate to! i love the bits about the lemonade skies, and the butterfly drunkenness...but my advice would be not to make the poem a song, leave it as it is...unspoilt and original. this is a poem for the sake of a poem

 

This is really good, man. It exactly describes my own feelings right now.

 

Thank you, my wonderful audience.
I am glad some people enjoy my words, which I use to build and to construct and to mold into a literary phenomenon called poetry.

 

I can definitely relate to this poem right now in my life. And I think there is no risk that could be more worth taking, than that of love.

 

i love your words.