baptized in you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gypsychildblues8, Aug 2, 2006.

  1. gypsychildblues8

    gypsychildblues8 Member

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    That day,I
    now sit in this sticky room,~~~~`~~`~~`~``~``~~~`
    I ooze of you
    . you have seeped into the cracks
    of my pores.
    my desire, & my obession
    dedicated infinte hours &
    seconds & minutes of thoughts
    of you.
    i sweat,& when i sweat,
    you run off my body
    i taste my tears &
    you are the salty essence
    producing streamy trails down my face
    you are,
    i,
    am,you
    & when the thunder strikes
    my so very young & fragile
    tenderness ..i come out of my body
    & immensely baptize my soul
    in the lucid particles within your
    spirit
    ,that
    .you dream
     
  2. rydns

    rydns Member

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    very good, racey... but very very good.

    thanx for sharing (snaps fingers)
    -Rydns
     
  3. deep_blue_death03

    deep_blue_death03 Member

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    To be overwhelmed in someone, and filled with insane emotion and thought.....the only escape is expression, which paints a colorful picture that hangs upon the heart......it's deep.
     

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