well yeah

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Icequeen, Aug 10, 2006.

  1. Icequeen

    Icequeen Member

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    yeah well...

    Here is my poetry.

    Forsaken all in abandonned kill,

    Lossing sanity in cheap bought thrill

    Caught in between the sands of time

    Ever dying heart into the sweet decay of crime,

    And forgotten soul tends to slip,

    When only the undead hold their grip

    Beyond the dark abyss of the sea,

    Waves crushing down, forcing blood to be




    and another one...



    Lying in destiny still,
    as icecold heart only seeks bleeding thrill
    when all that is inside left is a scratching scar,
    and mindless temper can only go so far
    as icecold heart seeks bleeding thrill,
    going on the hunt for yet another kill
    but gone beyone these creeping trees,
    is insanity all that heart sees

    enjoy.
     
  2. DBG

    DBG Member

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    Those were great! Keep up the good work!
     
  3. myself

    myself just me

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    Cool! All about insanity.
     
  4. shaman sun

    shaman sun Member

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    beautiful and well thought, as always :p
     
  5. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very well written! Keep them up, love hearing about other people's insanity. Makes my insanity seem normal ;)

    Peace and love
     

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