My Bad Haiku

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LuciferSam, Aug 12, 2004.

  1. LuciferSam

    LuciferSam Member

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    Ahem......

    "A Probably Faulty Haiku"

    by Bacardi Gold:p

    When brain cells die
    the spirit will fly
    and smack its head on the ceiling
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    haha! yes, i think you would have better luck counting the dead brain cells than the syllables!

    much love :)
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Silly -haiku-. Enjoyed :)
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thanks for sharing. You wrote your Haiku on my birthday. :)
     
  5. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    for bad haiku
    mine would be worse!!!


    havnt been here for aaaaages. how ya all doing crazy peeps
     
  6. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    hehehe, it's good, i like it! it's simple and fun. :)
     

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