In This Emptiness I Find.......

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  1. deep_blue_death03

    deep_blue_death03 Member

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    In Emptiness I Find………





    Life: a crazy tale of my existence. A crazy outline of the process of life.

    A design in the stars…..

    Darkness often encompass the sphere of “All”.

    Somehow we manage to survive still….

    Within the burden of it.

    All around I open the windows, and look out

    Into the world….I see it…..

    All around I see the signs of change.

    I found freedom when I found my heart again…

    When I found myself…like the first time.

    Intertwining into the ultimate plan…I see life.

    Unraveling in the sense of time…Life moves on still.

    Suddenly, the journey is clear to me….

    I look up at a full moon.

    My bandaged wings are healing and soon…..yes soon….

    I shall fly again.

    The fallen will rise again.

     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I like it! Well written.

    Peace and love
     
  3. shaman sun

    shaman sun Member

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    Powerful visuals, powerful meaning. Keep up the great work! :D
     
  4. myself

    myself just me

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    Lovely, psychological poem... shows someone's inner struggles... :)
     

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