Cocaine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lucyinthesky, Aug 13, 2004.

  1. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    im dying to make you
    wake up
    and make up
    and own up
    to the mis-takes.
    You made hearts ache
    and minds shake
    You lost time
    in your own whine
    What about mine?
    My Time?
    These things i'll never
    get back
    they're burnt black
    lost in crack
    you're crack co-caine
    you're lost.
    loss.
    losing.
    loser.
    you're a poser.
    it makes my brain fack- facking?
    -fucking-
    hurt.
    The End//
     
  2. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    @#$^%*&%
    it looked cooler the way i wrote it, all spaced out, and stuff
    BUT &*^&$ IT WONT LET ME INCLUDE THE EFFIN SPACES!!!!
     
  3. lovedatmj

    lovedatmj Member

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    I like your poem a lot. Did you or a close one struggle with cocaine addiction?
     
  4. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    i know a bunch of people who do.
    mainly my psycho ex's addiction affected me the most though.
     
  5. lovedatmj

    lovedatmj Member

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    Sorry to hear that. At least you have your writing ability.
     
  6. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I bet with the format you intended this would look and read really cool.
     
  7. logans hippy

    logans hippy Member

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    the poem you wrote is terrific..you describe it very well...and..our wording is very very sofisticated.
     
  8. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    how to you manage to capture things so well!?! i wish i could do that. you really have an amazing gift, hun. :)
     
  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Your time is Now. I love your directness and your exposed truth in the face of all the lies and schemes you feel. Playful and erotic; Wise and simple; Suffering and loving. I feel your woes.
     

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