In the Mood For

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hollie_26, Aug 24, 2006.

  1. hollie_26

    hollie_26 Member

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    dreams maybe

    beautiful ones

    those of nature, of love, of freedom

    of carefree moments and feelings,

    of riding horses and car racing,

    of good talks with people,

    of meeting strangers who'll change your life forever,

    of traveling or making yours or someone else's dreams come true

    for solitude

    silence, meditation, being alone

    finding refuge within your own self

    seeking inner being, looking for soul

    intertwining reality and idealism

    bridging the past and perhaps the future

    checking the hourglass and what I've done

    reaching out to my own inner core

    peace . . . at peace.
     
  2. tigerlily

    tigerlily proud mama

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    welcome to the forums hollie :)
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I enjoyed this. I kinda expected a Ween style piece because of the title (I'm in the mood to move three feet to the left... haha) but was pleasantly surpised. This moves nice, the ideas are broken up by imagery at the right places. Good work! :)

     
  4. myself

    myself just me

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    Mmmm... nice poems and nice entrance... welcome to the forums :)
     
  5. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    way too typical and boring

    (not really my style either, for that matter)
     
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