Moving Air

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Just found this on a scrap of paper when I was cleaning my room today. I remember being a bit buzzed on wine when I wrote it, back in May I think.

    Moving Air

    What sound on earth can even compare
    to this, the sound of rushing air
    that blowing lulls me to my dreams
    as through the leafy trees it streams
    it follows me into my sleep
    where visions flash with meaning deep
    this sighing sound brings with it light
    to save me from the dark of night
    these treetop blowings do console
    they clear my mind and soothe my soul
    so in the night i seek these blowing
    winds that whoosh and keep me going.
     
  2. LordHelmet

    LordHelmet Member

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    as always, good stuff man, keep it up
     
  3. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very good poem! I really liked it.

    Peace and love
     
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