Please comment on our Art Creation

Discussion in 'Art' started by havehope, Aug 26, 2006.

  1. havehope

    havehope Member

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    Hey guys, this our first post. Good day and happy days to all. We just want to get some comments and feedbacks on this comic that a friend and I did. We tried to make it original both in writing and in visuals. Please take a look at it and give some feedback. If you like it, feel free to vote for it at the bottom of the page. This is the link www.geocities.com/krillonekallane/
    if that don't work, try this, www.krillonkallane.smackjeeves.com
    Thanks a lot guys. Looking forward to your comments.
     
  2. Barbuchon

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    I guess that could be fun for young young people around 10-11 years old... just not my style. I think it's the same for most of the people on here. It's a hippy community, not that we can't like this, not just in our interests, well not mine.
     
  3. havehope

    havehope Member

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    I guess it's how you view it. Art is subject to interpretation.
     
  4. MikeE

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    The panels were too large. I had to scroll to see all of the panel.
     
  5. havehope

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    I think you have to do that for quite a few comics though, scroll to see the whole panel. A lot of webcomics are like that.
     
  6. Ryver

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    awesome! keep up the wonderful work!
     
  7. havehope

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    Thanks Ryver, just stay tuned for future issues.
    And Insanjester, that's your opinion matey...can't argue with it. Different interpretations for different autonomous beings.
     
  8. HonorSeed

    HonorSeed Senior Member

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    coming from another artist, myself.......whereas I consider comments from others who don't do art to be hollow whether positive or negative..........okay.

    The art is sophisticated and takes talent to do. It is definitely provocative in the sense it portrays comic book murders, etc., mundane and uninteresting topic in my case. If it is gonna be a struggle between forces of good and evil, I prefer comic books coming from the fantasy genre. Gargoyles and elves and such top my list.

    The sites don't have much pics on them without spending some time, not my cup of tea, but I did look and you have my 2 cents worth.

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  9. somedude

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    I'd pick a different font. The one you are currently using doesn't seem like the best fit for the drawing style.
     
  10. havehope

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    Yeah, thanks for the feedback guys. We have been experimenting with different fonts and stuff, dude, so thanks man.
     

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