As i hear those final tones, a fast chill races through my bones. Reminds me of who you used to be, so loving, so caring, so...dreamy. Sometimes i would ask myself if it was real, you said things that i wish i couldnt feel. I remember what you said and wont forget, and now its time to pay your debt. She's nothing but a bitch, who changes her attitudes with a flip of a switch. She's crazy, and she's all you think about. You couldnt hate her if you could, we all know you wish you would. She stops you from being the best, she's nothing but a little pest. I hate her, why cant you get rid of her? I hate that stupid bitch, she changes her personality by flipping a switch. She's crazy, and i wish, that "she" wasnt..me...
songs dont have to ryme all the time in fact they dont have to ryme at all. IF you ryme like you did in this song it can become annoying..Just giving you a tip peace chickens
It's not very...hmm....well Plesant if you going to make a song about hating someone get a thesaurous and try to make more myy=sterious lyrics, rather than saying "she's a bitch" use something clever like......Fuck i have no idea, i don't care about writing i hate my ex-girlfriend songs.... how about you choose a better subject?,
Ah fuck the critics! Say bitch or whatever else you want. I thought it was fine. Don't write for others, though, or it will be fake and everyone will know it. Write what you feel, no matter what it is. You want some real inspiration for crudeness and vulgarity - check out Charles Bukowski.
i think it eluded everyone here that the bitch you were talking about in the song was your self. This is a brilliant piece of subconscious vomit. lol Keep chucking it up. Art refines itself through the practical experience of the artist, and the artist, in the process of freeflow, learns more about themselves. this is the real purpose of art, as a mystical journey, not an entertainment for others. That it may refine itself to the point that others will find it entertaining might be all good, but should always be irrelevant to you. The vindication is in the experience of the mind exercising in passionate harmony with the heart and intuition and libido and finally through the actual mode of self expression. I commend you, young journey woman. Persist! much love
Write what you feel, take critics witha grain of salt, the more you write, the more you'll grow as a writer.
i wrote a lot of poetry, songs and stories. i may not always have the confidence in writing the ryhms, but i love to rhyme in some way. flows off your tounge a little sweeter. and its fun to have something to relate to. we all think we're a bitch sometime, and wish itd go away. i was writing about myself. and i liked that i could express myself as i did.
