Within a Week

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Sep 7, 2006.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    A strand of hair, so fragile and
    light coloured, the smell of it
    lingers only in imaginations...
    A face so pretty and undeniable,
    the sound of fingers touching
    soft belly.

    You were the only thing constructing
    my will, to bend towards the
    brilliant hope of sexual fantasies.
    The yellow harvest moon sings in
    a lifetime of loving over and over
    again, just like I do for you.

    Would it be crossing a line if
    I said I wanted you? To have
    and to hold and to fuck and to
    bathe on a late Autumn day. The
    kiss that you gave in a drunken
    funny haze was enough to make my
    life okay.

    My mind takes a bet with my heart
    that you've long since forgotten, never
    really knowing in the first place how
    much a tounge can mean to a soul
    who hasn't cried in years for
    fear of the shame.

    Take my hand on Sunday's and
    walk across the leaves and sand of
    my wildest dreams. Kiss me in that
    special way and skip my stone across
    the lake much better than I ever could,
    just ask my friends.

    I wanna be beside your smiling lips,
    on cold pillows of the night that
    never was. Sending and recieving
    tiny thoughts of love, or what that
    could maybe be, finding just the right
    words to define.

    Taking in the time and breath to
    suffer the truth in just the right way.
    Thinking of our minds as two
    alive and joyful babies, bouncing in
    the delight of each other's laughter.

    Kiss me for tonight and tomorrow,
    kiss me in romantic days,
    taking time to feel the sun
    and the sweetness of final
    mourning decay,
    Remember me as singing songs
    that make you wet, before you forget
    me within a week.
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Damn, I was hoping this one would get a little attention. *bump*
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    this is lovely almost pleading in words
    to love and be loved to enjoy all life has to offer...
    my fav bit is

    sending and receiving tiny thoughts of love....

    lovenpeace from saff......

    whos to say it may be forgotton....
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    damn dude, this is great. It sings with such longing and sadness and want for love. Wow. Unlike saffron, I can't pick a favorite part. I dig the whole thing.
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Big, big thanks as always to the both of you. I always enjoy your guy's comments, and they help me feel really confident in my work. Thanks, you guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
     
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