A voice of my own

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by peaceloveandsunshine, Sep 8, 2006.

  1. peaceloveandsunshine

    peaceloveandsunshine Member

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    Thrashing smashing outspokenly
    all my words are ripped from my mouth
    like i have no voice in this world of disgrace
    so many children following what their mothers and fathers say
    it seems like no one will ever challenge the ways of the power hungary house
    no child will step up they will only step down
    i feel as though nno one cares for our home the place we all live which is the world
    But what fears me the most is if i feel this way why cant i step up and say
    no thatt would never happen i would just step down again
    and let be what cant be
    so iam searching through my head and my thoughts for a voice
    and i realise the person stopping my voice from crying outloud
    is me.
     
  2. Any Color You Like

    Any Color You Like Senior Member

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    It's all really good...
    This makes me think of... me...
     
  3. peaceloveandsunshine

    peaceloveandsunshine Member

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    thanks man!!!!
     
  4. OleFlowerMan

    OleFlowerMan Member

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    That's the good stuff right there baby....keep writing alot of stuff :)
     
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