This could be you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by cinnamon_starrr, Sep 14, 2006.

  1. cinnamon_starrr

    cinnamon_starrr Member

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    Little girl Unknown


    The wallpaper is ripped and faded
    It had been patched in places
    she let her mind create
    all like music to a song
    the talent left unfound
    wasted
    she could paint
    she could draw
    she best the world
    had ever saw
    but now it was lost
    tucked away and unfound
    the wallpaper just dated and dated
    everyone sat and waited
    soon her life faded
    as it began to deteriorate
    where was thats song?
    the feeling left was only
    the feeling she didn't belong

    F.Turton.22 December 2004
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    To be honest i kind of wrote this about my mum. She was a good artist but wasted her talent but the whole meaning behind this poem is to get out and create, discover your talents, you never know if your going to be the next leader of a generation or if you are going to never discover that talent destined for you!
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi l love this poem,
    yes humans have many talents,
    but its the choice to act upon this ,thats what you can never
    change about someone...what path they choose..
    you can only hope and give encouragement........

    yet maybe this poem will give your mum an insight
    into her talent,and provide her with the life to try again.....

    you will find your own path,only when
    you have realized, will it become real...

    lovenpeace from saff
    very beautiful piece,to write such words of love
    for her,and what you miss...of her...now.
     
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