Childrens Imaginations

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by useless poet, Sep 16, 2006.

  1. useless poet

    useless poet Member

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    Some children have imaginations.
    That seem to have no ends.
    While some think they are Superheroes.
    Others have invisible friends.
    Some think they are Dragonslayers.
    With their swords made of nails and wood.
    While their are those,who climb trees in the orchard.
    Making out they are Robin hoods.
    Some swim across shark infested waters.
    While in the shallow end of the pool.
    There are those who parachute from aeroplanes.
    With a carrier bag and stool.
    A few like to build spaceships.
    With the furniture and duvets in their room.
    Then blast of into the galaxy.
    To be the first men on the moon.
    Some like to dress up in grown up clothes.
    Some even pretend to get wed.
    While some go to war,with their water guns.
    And roll around on the floor and play dead.
    Others are great explorers.
    there is no mountain they cannot climb.
    usuall when crawling into the top bunk.
    at the end of the day,bedtime.
    Some even play Doctors and Nurses.
    And practice with their friends.
    Some children have imaginations.
    That seem to have no ends.


    Copyright useless poet 2006
     
  2. Columbo

    Columbo Senior Member

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    I think I did every one of those things when I was a little kiddy
    just one slight criticism, er - ermm you might like to put the word
    "stool" into a theosaurus. It also means... well you look it up
    suffice to say - if some kid had the other kind of stool in their hand all the other kids would have run away holding their noses.
     
  3. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    No critique here. That was sweet! Kind of an ode to youth.
    Cheers!
     
  4. papapoet52

    papapoet52 Member

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    Truely cool,,,,,
     

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