Window Pane (some opinions would be much appreciated)

Window Pane

Through this window pane
is the key
To unlock the doors of perception
Blues and hues
reds and yellows
Through this window pane
is the reflection in a complex mirror

The dripping words of yesterday

Have slurred the ones of today

Through this window pane

Is mindfulness, enlightenment, realization
Of me, myself, & I

 

Okay.. I'll step up...

First Off, you're a good writer. I like your style and word choice... you're not worried about structure or form, yet you've got good rythm and flow.
Secondly, you need to think about what message you are trying to convey... when you write, all the reader has are the words in front of them (they cannot see the your thoughts and wont necessarily be able to make the connections with what you write as easily as you can). I get the gist of what you are trying to say... but there are things not clear.

I liked... "The dripping words of yesterday/Have slurred the ones of today"
Not so much... "Through this window pane/is teh reflection in a complex mirror"

 

its about my mindful preperation to drop acid

 

I like the poem! It has nice rhythem.

Peace and love