Not that my poetry gets much response in here...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by CrucifiedDreams, Sep 17, 2006.

  1. CrucifiedDreams

    CrucifiedDreams Members

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    But here's another recent one.

    The binding is torn
    The pages are loose
    The date is worn
    And hard to read
    The pictures have shifted
    But the smiles are still bright
    Flipping through the past
    One memory at a time
    Wondering where these people went
    This melancholy feeling fills me
    And I realize we are still the same
    But the weeks are much longer
    And at the end of the day
    we are now just to tired to pretend
     
  2. bruschetta

    bruschetta Member

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    sigh*:)
     
  3. rydns

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    Scrap books I presume?

    I know how you feel about poetry responce. my stuff dosent even get viewed sometimes.

    very good bravo!

    -Rydns
     
  4. misterrain

    misterrain Banned

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    maybe you don't get responses because everyone else is too busy obsessively checking to see if their own poem got a response.

    I would respond to your poem, but I hate poems!
     
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