a daisy chain, dominoes driving

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Aug 22, 2006.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    The fabric of daybreak was flowing, animate,
    an intimate breath over our awakening world.
    Warm sunlight bathed her body in bronze,
    burning brown freckles between bare blades
    and turning her hair into red fire waterfalls
    that spilled down Egyptian cotton sheets.

    How such mornings were held together
    in the calm, quiet-still of perfect peace
    seemed ivory tower; too star reachy...

    but a breeze rippled our crème curtains
    and when her emerald eyes unlidded,
    I saw a sly smile as memory blossomed.

    The days we lived were dandelion wish,
    in antiquated myths, metrical... repetitive.
    First light’s blush was a brushstroke
    thick with royal purple ink and oil.

    Embellishment became precognition,
    an exigent quest for a fortuitous sign.
    I swore we met in a flash, a vision
    with an eerie, mysterious design.

    Then the dogwood's budding reef rustled
    and we waded in its intoxicant.
    A mockingbird's melodious madness
    spun us into hypnotized crescendo.

    What was became irrelevant,
    passed up and blacked out.
    everything was opening.

    Time was a spark in emptiness,
    a daisy chain, dominoes driving.
    We engaged the outline
    with simple presence;
    nothing more.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Heck yeah! Wow, what a powerful first stanza.

    Good work there, fulmah, thanks for sharing. :)
     
  3. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    brilliant writing as always fulmah. remember me? :p
     
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