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  1. cinnamon_starrr

    cinnamon_starrr Member

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    Hey and welcome to the Beatnik cafe where you are welcome to share your poetry and song lyrics that is as hippy, retro and beatnik as it gets! where you will entertain everyone, Anyone can join us for coffee, beer or whatever! hope to see you perform'in here!

    peace out
     
  2. rainbow warrior

    rainbow warrior Member

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    Guess I'm the first member...Her I' go with a poem(sorry if my spelling's bad):

    Let me fly outside mr. Blake
    You know I'm The Lamb and Tiger in one
    To the glister of neon particles
    in crazy mid-european night

    (Some said that in july nights
    the moon becomes sharp and furious
    cuttin through sreamy clouds like a Saracen yatagan
    diamond sharp and radiant
    vision of insanity on the shores of hazy boredom)

    I can call the trippy, piper sound of the night
    into the edenic corn fields,
    just with the power of the one who feed us with lust
    Me-Tiger and a Lamb
    and my sunny bride,devoted to tears
    and drunkeness of eternal northern winds

    Let me fly away, to this graet movie displayed
    in the aurora borealis cinema of love
    while my fingers gently touch her hair
    heavenly river of warm cinnamon...
    Rio Platte of sublime evenings
    whene or minds leave
    for a connection with the pantheistic sky
     
  3. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    Nice :)

    This is mine:

    The air was hazy in the peak of the night
    The music spoke to our restless minds
    Reckless as our reckless time
    Ain't it good to be alive?
    Let it be, we were falling up
    Never ever coming down
    Music is fire; we let it burn
    Thought the wheeels of time would never turn
    And we knew it would last forever.
    Said "the dawn is breaking, but we're still here
    Living out our greatest years."
    The truth was soon to take it's toll
    I guess we'd been dreaming all along
    And a dream can't last forever

    Sweet Woodstock...
     
  4. joo kyle

    joo kyle thisandthat

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    here's one I wrote last year, I don't think it's near my best but it's one of the two I have typed already and I don't feel like typing I've written in my notebook right now.

    Everyone has died and I am left alone
    They’ve all become an end to what was truth
    The morning calls them at a over bearing fake moon
    They have demised their own fate and replaced with a fake hanging death

    Will they ever come back?
    Most likely
    But by then it will be to late
    They would have relised their wrong
    But can do nothing about what they’ve lost

    Awake and bask
     
  5. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    I like it. It was good.

    To Axl Rose:
    "Darling, why are you so sad?
    It's over now; that wasn't so bad."
    She used to tell you
    A long time ago
    When there was nothing else to say
    And your world was growing cold.
    "Darling, sorry if he made you cry.
    Tomorrow will be better; just try to close your eyes."
    She used to tell you
    She knew it was a lie
    When she saw your whole world crumble
    From the corner of her eye.
    Hold on
    Don't give up the fight.
    Hold on
    'Cause it's going to be alright.
    There'll be love soemday.
     
  6. joo kyle

    joo kyle thisandthat

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    here's the other one on my computer...still not my best but I can post it and still be lazy,

    I’ve killed before
    Rented a false sense and went wild
    Created a jewel
    But the jewel is to be broken at dawn

    Leaving the net at the morning
    Striking threw the moon with a power that is unwilling
    Once more it comes to this
    And again the dream is lost
    And the one rembered has become silent
     
  7. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    If only we could love
    We wouldn't need to fight
    To prove we're right
    We would have peace.
    If only we could love
    There'd be no need for violence
    And on one would be silenced
    The bombs would cease.
    But we're drenched in so much hate
    The blood we're spilling shows our fate
    Why can't we learn to love?
     
  8. joo kyle

    joo kyle thisandthat

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    I found one more

    Remember those days where we’d laugh and we’d sing
    We’d play in the yard
    And for that moment we all free?

    The they’d call us in and tell us what to do
    What to eat and tie our shoes

    We’d never fight back
    Were scared and in fear
    But we went on
    Because we all had our dreams running out from our heads threw our hair

    Then we’d go to the building where we had fun
    And dreamed and dreamed about going to the next one

    Highschool was cool
    We thought we would rule
    Until we saw it sucked
    As our minds were getting fucked

    Then we once we got out we wish we could do it again
    Scared of the world they they instilled in our heads

    They fucked us all
    And some of us knew all long
    While the others they played their games and studied for their grades
    The rest of us wanted more

    We will not know what happens here but the bullshit they told us to want we know fear
    Scared of it all
    We would’ve never guessed as we ran threw those halls
     
  9. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    Damn that rocked.

    To Jerry Garcia:

    As we watch you dig your grave
    We can't help but wonder
    If you'll ever be the same.
    As you fall to far to save
    We can't help but wonder
    If you've forgotten your own name.
    Lay down here and rest.
    We only want what's best.
    And please remember...
    We love you nonetheless.
     
  10. Pinball Wizard

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    Good Job^
    Running through the hazy field
    Fog is dancing all around
    The glazed moon is starring down
    Freedom is the night
    Give into the temptation
    Join the night
     
  11. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    okay, i'll join in the fun here, i got 2, one i wrote sort of a while ago, and one i wrote sort of recently.

    the first one is all onomatopoeia, so ya gotta use your imagination, but hopefully if ya can get it to work for ya (however it should), it'll be pretty neat. or, i think so anyways, i likes it, here it is:

    whistle....
    rustle....
    whistle....
    rustle....
    crack....
    snap....
    sss....
    pop....
    whistle, chirp, whistle
    cheep....
    woosh
    whistle....
    rustle....


    -rdw may 5 06
     
  12. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    and now the sort of recent one. i kind of forgot i had written it (haven't looked in my notebook in a while :eek: ). anyways, it's another one i'm pleased with...


    A heavenly wind blows
    Over me
    It carries with it an
    Elegance
    Of course it breathes
    Like the fire
    For it is rapid
    And tender


    -rdw sept 14 06
     
  13. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    Cool :)

    To Axl Rose:

    Child without a name
    I know you're not the one to blame
    Your spirit bears no shame.
    I can see into your eyes
    And baby, I don't see no lies
    Only desperate cries.
    Did they seal your heart
    Without a reason why?
    Still your soul
    Trade your life for lies?
    When there's nowhere to go
    You're not alone.
    When there's no one to hold
    You're not alone.
    I've been there before
    You're not alone.
     
  14. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Awesome! :)
     
  15. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    Thanks :)

    Lets see...

    They say I'm crazy
    'Cause I wanna rock 'n roll.
    Don't say I'm crazy
    'Cause I like it and it never gets old.
    When there's nothing to do
    And nothing to loose
    Get stoned!

    Hehe I dunno.
     
  16. rainbow warrior

    rainbow warrior Member

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    Hey!
    You gentle,peacock-like wilderness
    i only wish to unfold before your bottlecaps eyes
    smiling,willingly and beautifull,without purpose at all

    Once we shall be old and forgotten,
    dying rock'n'roll angels carried with the stream of vodka
    away into the whispering,holy night
    (out of sight)
    (out of sigh?)
    Out on tha bona fide fields of the meadow
    that the wise ones call
    the wilderness
     
  17. rainbow warrior

    rainbow warrior Member

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    Damn!Nobody is posting there anymore...Come on people!Maybe this wil shake you up

    She is looking for a man with
    January-hands...Equaly enbracing her from both her sides
    A man with reflective heart in which she can see herself...
    Heart in which she fixes her make-up and hair...
    A water-surface,tender and weak heart of mine

    She is looking for a fool...
    The ragged rebel, cowboy to happy to grow old...
    And to sad to stay young...
    A man who changes from a.m. to p.m.
    The angel...sainted cold handed cryng rag-doll
    for her to play with...
    She is waiting for me...
     
  18. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Dancing round the fire
    Singing the old tunes
    Enjoying a Blue Moon or two
    Skipping between the pillars
    Everyone join in!
    There's plenty of room for you.
    Just let your inhibitions go,
    at least for this one magical night,
    Under the blissful starry sky.
    Pass the bowl around,
    and enjoy our festivities.

    Peace and love
     
  19. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    chuck a belly here we go...

    the world awaits for something
    what it is we don't know
    but we hope it will be swell
    for fear of going to hell

    then as it comes we hide like sheep
    making no peep scared out of our minds
    holding each other
    fighting each other
    loving each other
    killing each other
    while the it has left without our knowledge

    finally we submerge into the light
    claiming all that we see
    untill the day when it comes
    and cycle begins again
     
  20. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    My beautiful muse stares into my eyes
    Putting me into a trance
    We lie in silence, enjoying each other's company
    Holding each other in our arms.

    The moon bathes us in light
    beneath the starry sky
    and a deep black abyss.
    Meteriotes fly over our heads.

    The beauty of the night cannot be described with mere words,
    lying beneath the willow tree by the pond.
    The rainbow bass leap out of the water,
    shining in the silver moonlight.

    This is our life together.

    Peace and Love
     

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