not quite a poem but something along the lines of a poem.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by clementinexo, Sep 30, 2006.

  1. clementinexo

    clementinexo hip *****s sucks.

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    OCTOBER:

    winter is coming
    she can feel the chill in her bone
    he is departing
    "will you be back?" she asks
    "i don't know"
    she regrets having never expressed her feelings
    she was never honest with him
    his ride is coming
    "i'll miss you" he says
    "i'll miss you too"
    she would love to go to where he is
    if he would have her
    "will you have me?" she whispers 10 seconds too late
    10 seconds too late was always her fate
     
  2. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    along the lines enough :)

    nice :D

    a common lament amongst many of us, i'm sure
     
  3. Sage Man

    Sage Man Member

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    Nicely written, but hopefully that won't be your fate :)
     
  4. clementinexo

    clementinexo hip *****s sucks.

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    thank you.
     

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