slowly sun in no moonlight blues drippin against morning slowly swimming to wonder to try was to feel the so shining die think free something getting me big remember deeper I'm getting down..lost when love don't remember trees upside on night dream they're the lines how weary it waves..to fade wouldn't mind once are your will before it is right you see the moment that drags..gotta since its trapped too afraid? see yourself..you see me..i take out from sea run through time..run through like I'm the bulb find wear in memory lights cause back in time for to back it beats today
Deep, great flow for me until... 'Once are your will before it is right' perhaps this was intentional given the next 'you see the moment that drags..gotta since its trapped.' Regardless, i found alot of power surges here and expansive ideas.
thank you. this was my very first cut up poem. i used lyrics from about 15 different songs to get what i got. i think i might have to try this more often, i didn't realize that you could create something so spontaneous out of something that already existed. i used a random generator using sometimes a couple songs worth a lyrics at a time to get one line. from there i just kept regenerating them hundreds of times until i noticed a line that stood out and created a certain feeling or vision that could be used as part of the whole. most of it is completely random, i only changed a couple words so that it would be somewhat coherent to a reader. it probably only makes sense to me.
