Morning Dust

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Half A Sandwich, Oct 5, 2006.

  1. Half A Sandwich

    Half A Sandwich Member

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    Morning light pierces
    Through half drawn shades
    Particles of dust are born, age, fall in love
    And fading into shadow, die
     
  2. laughingtears

    laughingtears Member

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    hm... quite interesting, makes you ponder
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Great job! Circular and minimal...
    reminds me of a passage from the movie 'Broken Wings.'
     

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