Walking through different doors

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by laughingtears, Oct 5, 2006.

  1. laughingtears

    laughingtears Member

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    Changing

    Walking through different doors

    A car, its door is open,

    It’s an endless journey

    Getting into the car

    Taking a side road

    My car

    Chugging onwards

    Barely

    Barely moving

    Leaving each new found haven

    Moving

    changing

    It’s raining

    Pounding on my window

    Sliding down the glass

    Like tears

    Moving, barely,

    A snail pace,

    A heart is hard to come by,

    And I left mine

    behind.
     
  2. ChristadelicFlower

    ChristadelicFlower Member

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  3. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    hmm... I thought to be simplictic and yet somehow enjoyable (Puff..Puff..Puff)
     

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