can't sleep again

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Pinecone, Oct 18, 2006.

  1. Pinecone

    Pinecone Member

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    what does it mean that i feel so alone
    every night when my friends go away
    what does it mean that every time it gets late
    I can't believe no one wanted to stay
    The music we played was a glorious sound
    but now the calm of night is desolate
    The words that we shared were hopeful and proud
    but now im feeling weak and desperate
    I guess i'll have to calm myself...
    cause no one wants to wake to tell me...
    Just calm down and go to bed
    tomorrow you'll be fine
    just lie down and rest your head
    the sun returns in time...
    all night... moonbeams
    and starlight... bring dreams
    and when you're rested for a new day
    the sun will rise up
    the world will wake up
    and your friends will come out to play
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very pretty! I can relate to those feelings, when friends leave and I feel empty inside. I think it was very well-written.

    Peace and love
     

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