Sunrise

Thank you
for carefully daubing
ochre clouds with light
just for me.

Thank you for kissing me
with a wisp of wind
when I smiled.

 

Short and sweet! I really like it.

Peace and love

 

I like this...because the when I read it ...I can feel that sun...and that kiss of the wind...and even the smile....

So simple and so effective. Beautiful.

 

such clarity in such brevity. nice job