Come, and sit, and sip this brew. I’ll watch, and smile, and share with you, The thoughts and souls, and people who, Have made this life complete. The sun will come, and day will break, With wind across a bone-chilled lake, But we’ll stay warm; my hand you’ll take… If others only knew… Into the depths our minds might roam, Beneath the endless, milky foam. Until we stand and head for home; Tread lightly through the dew. From ‘tween the sheets our day will start, And through your eyes a swirling art, That drips and pours into my heart, Two souls without a clue… ...im really sick... and i wrote this last night at like 4 in the morning... i havnt written in a long time... but recent events have inspired me to start up again... ...honest feedback please
Very well written. I like the careful construction of it, with the first three lines rhyming in the verse. Very nice! Peace and love
Hey it's a guy thing....I post one that I was just inspired by some unrequited love here shortly..... Peace&Love Paul
Sweaters and Hugs Sweaters and hugs, And warm coffee mugs. Stars in the sky, A yawn, and a sigh. Long bundled nights, Beneath sparkling lights. And it feels so right, To keep holding you tight… …So I think that I might… Walking past dark, Through long lonely parks. A black cat… But we’ll take shelter Between lanterns From icy-breath gusts. Butterfly kisses, And unspoken wishes. A bottle of wine, Makes honesty mine, And I feel fine… Are we lost in our youth? As lost as the truth…
Fluffing Pillows Fluff this pillow, And tuck these sheets; Bring my cuddly bear. Now kiss my cheek, And hold me close; Run fingers through my hair. This night was long; My mind is dark; Caressed by a nightmare. It left me pale, It left me sick; Whimp’ring in despair. But then you came And brought with you, Devotion, love, and care. So now I’m still, For you must be, The answer to my prayer. So stay with me, And never leave That peaceful rocking chair. For when you’re ill, And tears distil, I’ll return your welfare. Fluff your pillow; I’ll tuck your sheets; Bring your cozy bear. I’ll kiss your cheek, And hold you close; Run fingers through your hair.
One Night Saved It’s complicated… Fall’s lovely little bouquets of dried leaves, And the dancing intricate winds That chill your inside; How they get such little attention. There is so much to see, Things that never get old. Stories told and untold; Concepts people don’t hold. Rushing regret… But it’s not over yet. I feel like a fish, Trapped in a net. Flopping and dry, Though the water’s still wet. I long for the sea, As it calls out to me, And I’d much rather be… Well I’d rather be free… Warm my hands and feet. Sit me by the fire. Sing, And bring your guitar; Bring me someplace far. Then we’ll get in your car, With the music down low, We’ll hum and we’ll flow, Beneath a soft, subtle glow… While the dreamers are saving, Their hearts for tomorrow.
