My Bride

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by supertramp, Oct 23, 2006.

  1. supertramp

    supertramp Member

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    I killed my fear,
    I tamed my shame,
    Day after day goes by the same.

    I hug the earth,
    I hold on tight,
    I listen to her every night.

    She is my bride,
    my freedom ride,
    I'd be so lonley,
    if not for her by my side.

    She feeds me well,
    and clothes me too,
    so there really isn't much to do,
    but enjoy her company!
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I loove the first verse! This is by far my favorite poem of yours. Keep on writing!

    Peace and love
     
  3. lanaia74

    lanaia74 Member

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    Well done!
     
  4. ethanberry

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    Excellent expression of love and marriage. I think your bride was swept away.
     
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