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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Makimono402, Oct 23, 2006.

  1. Makimono402

    Makimono402 Member

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    Snow gracefully hugs the glass of your room`s windows
    It`s not as beautiful because of those tacky blinds

    It`s late now in this bright, white place
    There`s little movement in its catacombs

    I`ve been sitting here for the last 3 nights
    I`ve only been as far as the instant coffee machine.

    I don`t want to leave this plastic chair
    In a place where you and all their explanations are full of holes
    I`m the only solid thing left.

     
  2. vcr

    vcr Member

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    Good lady, succinct, potent, impacting. glad am I that you have such an umbrella, for greatly sad am I that you to, know the place of such deep despair. If there is anything at all I can do, please do not hesitate to PM me.
    sine cera
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Great simplicity here, but powerful in the images it renders. If this isn't fictional, I wish you the best. Stay solid.
     
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