Dead Still

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Oct 24, 2006.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Dead Still

    Hold your eyes dead still
    steady on the single star.
    Hold them still, until
    all your vision fades away;
    a world turned grey.
    Let your eyes empty out
    of all the things you can't bear to see.
    Hold to the light,
    till even that fades,
    lost to sight;
    this is a taste of what's to come.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very pretty! I like the flow of it.

    Peace and love
     
  3. ConeyIslandOfTheMind

    ConeyIslandOfTheMind Member

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    Well, fuck me running, I think I love it. :eek:
     
  4. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    ^ word is bond

    i also love the flow

    god damn all of you and your ability to free write with such rhythm

    i hate you all :D
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    thanks everyone :)
     
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