unjust

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 06thenewsummeroflove, Oct 24, 2006.

  1. 06thenewsummeroflove

    06thenewsummeroflove Member

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    Call it a cry for help
    call it individuality
    Call it insane
    but I call it reality
    Say that it's nothing
    say it doesn't matter
    Say my heart is fine
    but I say it'll shatter
    Tell me to stop
    tell me there's no excuse
    Tell me to quit
    but I tell you there's no use
    Give it your prayer
    give to it your blessing
    Give it your love
    but I give all I'm stressing
    Let it be taken
    let it be free
    Let it be wild
    but I let it have me
    Pray it's a phase
    pray it less time
    Pray it to leave
    but I pray it is mine
    Speak of it's horror
    speak of it's personality
    Speak of it's sorrow
    but I speak of insanity
    Whisper it's secrets
    whisper it's tales
    Whisper your prayer
    but I whisper it fails

    Cry out with love
    cry out with lust
    Cry out with joy
    but I cry out unjust


     
  2. vcr

    vcr Member

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    fascinating
     
  3. lanaia74

    lanaia74 Member

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    VERY well done!
     
  4. TreeFiddy

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    mm I really like the ending...closes it all very nicely, endings are important in poems like this and you did it quite well.
     
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