Spider

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shaman sun, Oct 27, 2006.

  1. shaman sun

    shaman sun Member

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    What we leave behind
    What we carry, mind
    What we starve inside,
    Our own bodies.

    What we desecrate,
    What we destroy,
    We make,
    Spiderwebs wrap soft to kill.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I like it a lot! I enjoy reading your poetry.

    Peace and love
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Man, i love it. The last line really hits it home.
     
  4. Dark Party

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    I'm not so convinced on the rest, but this last line is killer.
     
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