chimeric valley

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 2extreme, Nov 1, 2006.

  1. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

    Messages:
    216
    Likes Received:
    0
    We walk up this kaleidoscopic valley
    as lost wanderers in this psychotropic weald and

    as explorers of this dreamlike world.

    Every tree seems to speak to us,
    guiding us through this psychedelic vale,
    and our feet rake up decayed foliage
    leaving behind us, a trail.


    And the sun peaks
    through the summit of the alley,
    slowly being submerged
    beneath the stockade of trees,
    but we keep wandering, wanting
    to go deeper and deeper into
    this dreamlike reality, and we'll
    never stop wandering
    until our minds can't take anymore
    of this euphorically insane
    world of abnormality.

    And when our minds want out
    of this bizarre mentality
    we'll travel backwards
    down
    the trail we created,


    back into a sane actuality.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

    Messages:
    6,809
    Likes Received:
    5
    phantasmagorically, well done ;)
     
  3. vcr

    vcr Member

    Messages:
    152
    Likes Received:
    0
    amen and hallejweirdja, extremely well done, I particularly like the allusion to there being a controlled exit path.
    sine cera
     
  4. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

    Messages:
    216
    Likes Received:
    0
    Thanks very much.
     
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice