"striving"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by quietthinker, Nov 1, 2006.

  1. quietthinker

    quietthinker Member

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    Striving for the other,​
    a protective mother​
    put together a life full of fantastic relationships​
    learn from the hunger​
    don’t mind the weather, you’re looking better​
    thanks to the way you styled your hair​
    coming closer to a solution​
    driving to create and sophisticate the mind​
    the wild, absolute possibility of life after death​
    incorporating song, to move the unbelievers​
    work them into accepting reincarnation​
    spare the truth for the end​
    its your life you make create it as you feel best​
    forwards towards the other​
    loving father​
    picture a world of godliness​
    striving for a world with no pleasure​
    guilt, tests your intentions​
    its been written;do and you will regret​
    mother was never there to protect you​
    but if she was you know she’d have done so with her life​
    so where do the restless go now?​
    Striving for the other​
    teaching themselves from the knowledge they’ve come to trust​
    spirituality sophisticates the mind​
     
  2. lanaia74

    lanaia74 Member

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    Totally AWESOME!
     
  3. DSLC

    DSLC Member

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    I've been mulling over this for the past day or so. Some of the ideas are quite stunning.
    If you don't mind me asking: are these Buddhist, Hindu, or Christian sentiments? Other?
     

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