Last Night (June 11, 2006) I've known for a while But it hit me hard last night Holding you in my arms It just felt right No words were spoken Only silent bliss Looking in your eyes Just before we kissed My heart was racing It was hard for me to breathe There's just something about you That makes me weak in the knees Trying to go to sleep Lying in the bed I could think about nothing else Only what we said We said we love each other I have never felt that before But I really do love you Of that, I am sure. This poem is about the first time Kari and I told each other that we love each other. I thought it would be nice to comemorate the day. _________________________________________________________________ Our Life Together A couple of dogs Picket fences I'm the mister You're the missus Lying in the bed With a big ass bong Taking mega-tokes All night long Growing old Our hair turns grey We'll be together Until our dying days I love you And I love these feelings I can't wait To make you Kari Williams It's not a proposal Not just yet But it is a promise And it will be kept. I wrote this for her before we got engaged. _________________________________________________________________ Our Path Where are we headed? Only God knows We'll just have to wait And see where it goes Two paths become one Our hearts intertwined What's mine is yours And what's yours is mine I share your pain Your happiness too Whatever happens I will be with you 100 percent I give you my heart Smoking blunts with our grandkids I hope we never part The way you make me feel I've never felt before What is loneliness? I don't know anymore I love you so much I'll say it again I love you so much I hope this never ends. Any thoughts? _________________________________________________________________ Karijuana I feel it in my heart Everytime I kiss you When we're apart I always miss you You make this place worth the stress I look into your eyes And completely forget about the rest You make me feel high Whenever you're near I hope you feel the same This raises my only fear Thoughts of abandonment Run through my mind I am weary Because they leave me everytime I start to get close Then they disappear I feel so alone Then come the tears My heart aches when I think about it Then I see your face And I completely forget about it Thanks for the picture by the way I can just look at it And all thoughts of abandonment are All gone away. This was the first poem I wrote for her. what do you think?
Those are nice, man. No better inspiration in the world than love. Only thing I didn't like was in the third one, the "smoking blunts with our grandkids" line is out of place with the rest of the poem.
It actually means more than it says. I put it in there to express my wishes to still be with her long enough to have grandchildren and how much it would mean to us to be able to smoke with them when they are old enough.
Yeah, true, I got that, but it just didn't fit there. A different poem, maybe, but not that one. Just my opinion, though.
Also, weed is a HUGE part of our relationship and we wouldn't even be together if it wasn't for weed and we may not have even met each other in the first place without weed. I just saw her sitting on the stoop at Job Corps, never having met her or even hearing her name, and I invited her to smoke two blunts with me. That week, I smoked 40+ blunts with her and we got really close really fast. So I would say that line fits the poem, or at least the sentiment.
Yeah it was a lot of blunts for fuckin $10 each at job corps. I had just recieved my tax return, which was just over $400 and I spent it all on prerolled blunts, because that's all that was available.
I don't know what to say. Cheesy words of 'omfg I like them sooo much!' seem terribly out of place. It's so sweet to see this expression of the love between you two; so sweet. I'm all smiley now!
