I'm not much of a poet, but i tried. This is for my Big Bro. Love and peace. He jerks wildly around in time with the sound of his favourite music.. He's not listening, cannot hear cannot see cannot feel a result of his self inflicted sickness... knife your wrist, the wound deepends, release the pain you hold within Lose yourself, you are dying through the heavens you are flying. whats that noise? There's a humming in the corner you are strumming, your guitar and you realise I'm alive so you cry. Saved again by faceless strangers, warning him of the dangers, accompnied by the lifestyle that he chose... with machines and modern science they released him from the silence once more up from limbo he rose... knife your wrist, the wound deepends, release the pain you hold within Lose yourself, you are dying through the heavens you are flying. whats that noise? There's a humming in the corner you are strumming, your guitar and you realise I'm alive so you cry. Another chance he is given to return to the living he vows to use it to the full... finaly peace surrounds his heart he plans a brand new start that day, not by his hands, he is killed...
"with machines and modern science they released him from the silence once more up from limbo he rose..." Words that ought to shatter the silence of reading in my head - I'd love to hear that set to music, A soulful singer and a sax... Thank you for sharing
wow leesah..i'm blown away you mentioned the other night about your bro but i didnt want to ask and you didn't explain any further.. but i had no idea ... hugs
Biida- funny you should say that. I asked a mate of mine to put it to music a while ago. He didn't like the lyrics though and it just never happened thanks everyone :&
