Tramp

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by leec, Nov 13, 2006.

  1. leec

    leec Member

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    Look at that tramp lay on the floor
    on his own in the shop door
    Nothing but a mound of cowardness and despair
    How did this come to be ? do you really care ?

    This man was never given a chance
    This man failed to learn how to believe
    failed to assert ,failed to achieve
    miserable and wet,another day
    asking for your money in a undignified way

    How can he define right from wrong
    living like vermine for so long
    Who is to blame ? or what a shame ?
    throw him 20p and never say a word again
    junkie scum bag there all the same

    Night by night living in fear
    living at the bottom, never sheading a tear
    feeling down drink more beer ,cider ,wine
    commit crime ,rob your grandma for a white line
    sometimes i wanna shoot the fucker
    dont care about doin time

    Why o why can this be
    this could of happend to you or me
    Give him love give him a hug
    ask why dont be shy
    say good mornin say bye bye
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Interesting piece of poetry. What inspired you to write this?

    Peace and love
     
  3. leec

    leec Member

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    hi
    i buy the big issue sometimes (its like a magazine the homeless people sell) they confront you to buy this magazine many people ignore them i always try to acknowelegde them sometimes tho i cant be bothered with them
    they are people at the end of the day they deserve some respect
     
  4. Illmaeo

    Illmaeo Member

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    I dig it. But you're talking about a bum, not a tramp I'm afraid. Not that it makes any difference in your poetry, you can say whatever the hell you want, but a tramp is someone that chooses to be without a home and travels from place to place by walking/hitching/busing/hopping freight etc. The homeless guy sitting in the shop door begging for change is a bum. It's a rhetorical difference, but I thought you might be interested.
     
  5. leec

    leec Member

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    dam!! all that spell checkin for nothing will have to try and do another one
     
  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    As some famous churchman said at some point, "there, but for the grace of God, goes I" as he saw a leper or some other miserable wretch walk past him. You're right, this could be any one of us. Even if not in a literal sense of being poor, we can be poor inside just as easily, and that can be just as bad sometimes.
     

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