welcome to this life your life not his life or her life your being you're being hearing, seeing words and feelings have no meaning other than your meaning your life, your words your faith you're heard a spirit, a soul no void, no hole fill it up, fill your bowl grain of rice or grain of sand human being, human man woman, child, stages and steps one, two, three imagined percepts perceptions, prescriptions emotions, restrictions words and meanings life, fleeting? at a glance take a stance step ahead and make a move outward in and inward out never worry, find your groove your life, this life now life, wish life set in motion what a notion this life, what life what meaning, what feeling it happens quiet down and shit happens with existence coexistence breathe in, out fear not, don't pout here it comes, there it goes emptied bowl, down the hole welcome to life now go, go, go -rdw 11/15/06
The enumerations remind me of Walt Whitman. And the rhythm, as someone else said before, is very good. Also, the message - look for your own meaning in life...
