I Wrote My First Song!!

Discussion in 'The Whiners' started by music man, Nov 26, 2006.

  1. music man

    music man Member

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    My voice isn't the best, but trust me, if i sing lower (my voice is naturally extremely low(i had a lower voice than my dad at 10)) it would be a lot worse! But none the less, i am still very proud of it

    Check It Out!
    www.myspace.com/michaelzuckerman

    And if you wanna add me, go for it.


    And please be brutaly honest! :)
     
  2. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I enjoyed the song, except the timing sounds almost psychedelically induced and it doesn't quite match up to the vocals, which were a lacking a little emotion at some parts coinciding with the music.
     
  3. mr.mescalito

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    yea man. you got potential for your age and I liked it... keep on jammin and jammin and singing and singing and you'll only get better and better :)
    its always great to hear from people's music, and I enjoyed what you did.
     
  4. music man

    music man Member

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    thanks for the advice, well noted!

    and thanks mr.mescalito!
     
  5. Optical Sound

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    I agree the vocals lacked a little emotion, but I know how hard it is to sing, so you did a great job. I liked the song but I couldn't quite make out your words, which I'd like to know. Can you type the lyrics?
     
  6. music man

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    sure man, here ya go:

    Why
    Can't things be
    The way they are
    Meant to be ------tell me if you think supposed sounds better than meant
    Just sit back
    You got to let it be
    It is what it is
    It is what it is


    Don't be
    Someone who can't see
    The times we live in
    Are reality
    Just sit back
    You got to let it be
    It is what it is
    It is what it is

    We tried
    We tried to hard
    It didn't work out
    Now look where we are
    Just sit back
    You got to let it be
    It is what it is
    It is what it is
     
  7. Freekske

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    For those about to rock I salut you!!!
     
  8. Alana

    Alana Come again!?!

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    I couldn't understand the word either, but all-in-all I really liked it! I played it again reading the lyrics, and I thought it sounded fine.
     
  9. music man

    music man Member

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    I'll rerecord the vocals on it.
     
  10. fistermister

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    Simple lyrics, but still very good (particularly for 14). I'm sure your voice will develop as you get older. If you are serious, maybe get some kind of voice training.
     
  11. Orsino2

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    Hot damn. You get on that, boy... you can do it!1!!!1!!


    Yayeuh...
     
  12. Donvito1122

    Donvito1122 Hippy Teacher to be!

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    Very mellow, and pretty good. I agree you need a little practice with singing (but so do I..lol) so no worries...you have great talent for your age man, and keep at it. By the time your 18 who knows you could be the next dylan..lol ;). Keep it up and let us know if you record anymore.
     
  13. ALLY0UN33DISL0V3

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    A mi me gusta mucho....
    and of corse the re recording will help us understand:)

    If you arent apposed to drums or whatnot, I have a program that can add things like that if you wanted......
     
  14. music man

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    oh, well for drums, i'm going to get a bongo or djembe, or both :) and i'm going to do something like that for it. but thanks for the offer(if you were offering?) :)
     

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