Joy in the Nothing

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shaman sun, Nov 29, 2006.

  1. shaman sun

    shaman sun Member

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    the joy
    the joy
    inside from our start
    the silence
    the silence
    within from without

    and when you breathe
    universe comes out
    parts the lips
    and tumbles down

    and when you cry
    waterfalls come to be
    tossed and turned
    becoming ocean and sea

    and when you gaze
    lessons and life manifest
    from haze
    spiraling a thousand ways to give

    joy in the nothing
     
  2. trekker

    trekker Intrepid Traveler

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    I like it. Seems to be about giving and lessons learned.
     
  3. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    Nice. Reminds me of ego trippin' by Nikki Geovanni.
     
  4. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    Very nice.
     
  5. warmhandedcanadian

    warmhandedcanadian shit storm chaser

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    yes I like it alot....

    this is a cool concept

    "and when you breathe
    universe comes out
    parts the lips
    and tumbles down"
     
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