"sad dragon"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stratface, Dec 5, 2006.

  1. stratface

    stratface Member

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    "Sad Dragon"

    he screams, he cries, he rolls his eyes
    but noone cares about a sad dragon.

    he stomps and shouts "i want to die!"
    but noone cares about a sad dragon.

    he runs in and smashes the town,
    his tears fall and the people all drown,
    i looked at them, and you know what i found?
    they all hate the mad dragon,
    they damn the hell-sent dragon.
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    my other poem, "reap of me," recieved positive reviews, so i thought i'd post another one. all comments, questions, and critisiscms accepted with open arms. thankyou.
     
  2. stratface

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    apparently noone cares about the sad dragon...
     
  3. The manticore

    The manticore Member

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    orginial way of writting a thought
     
  4. Flux

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    I kinda liked it
     
  5. stratface

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    why thankyou.
     

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