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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Flowers In My Hair, Dec 22, 2006.

  1. Flowers In My Hair

    Flowers In My Hair Spontaneous Joy

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    Here is my story,

    The story of me.

    I am not what

    I seem to be.

    I am not what

    I taste, touch and see.



    Here is my story,

    The story of me.



    I am not labels.

    You cannot define,

    The I that I am,

    The ever divine.

    I belong to no one,

    And no thing is 'mine'.



    I am not my past,

    For time is not real.

    I am not my emotions,

    I am not what I feel.

    I am just I,

    And I is ideal.



    I am not my thoughts,

    This I is free.

    I am not my actions.

    I hope you agree,





    Here is my story,

    The story of me.
     
  2. IrishFreeRoller

    IrishFreeRoller Member

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    you captured something here which ive tried to many times and failed! thanks for putting into words whats in my mind! keep up the great work!
     
  3. Flowers In My Hair

    Flowers In My Hair Spontaneous Joy

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    Thank you for your compliments!! It means a lot when coming from someone I consider an exceptional writer. :)
     
  4. guinea

    guinea Member

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    man that was a great way of self expression and very honest and real, keep on writing
     
  5. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    Simple. Nice. True.
     

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