There is a war being fought overseas there is a war being fought on our soil there will never be peace with a hate filled leader not as long as there is oil and just what do the wealthy whites know? sure they know how to start a war but they send our young soldiers to die alone nobody quite certain what for Corruption and lies is all i see knowing my government failed me and the minds of innocent permanently scarred cursed and tortured on helplessly Its our human gene of love and war fighting until earth be gone and all this power trip dont mean a thing No war has ever been won.
The only thing that I feel is missing, is hope. The poem is disparaging and doesn't necessarily incite hope into the readers. Nothing changes without hope... despair is never enough to inspire.
