The Shepherd of the Sands

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  1. deram_scholzara

    deram_scholzara Member

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    The Shepherd of the Sands

    By his will the grains will bend
    like sight against a looking glass
    By the story of his life
    The world would change
    but the sea of the sun would swarm to its master
    And all that was done will be done again
    When he lifts his hand
    When he chooses to try

    By life his desert will slip away
    like reading into an abyss
    By the scars on his face
    The words would prove true
    but the sound of his faith would fall under their feet
    And the cracking of this image will unfold again
    When he stands so high
    When his beauty is not the world's

    By his love the sands will bury
    like clouds o'er hatred's grave
    By the choice he has made
    The thought of emotion would die
    but the lost light in memory would always be hope
    And the instance of reliving will redeem again
    When his story wakes him
    When his dusts clear the stones
     
  2. deram_scholzara

    deram_scholzara Member

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    seriously no replies?
     
  3. MagnanimityMan

    MagnanimityMan Member

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    i love it, especially the beginning.. the last paragraph kinda stretches me out a bit,, but , keep on doing What You Do brother =)
     
  4. myself

    myself just me

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    i think it's an amazing poem
     
  5. MagnanimityMan

    MagnanimityMan Member

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    amazing yes amazing :)
     
  6. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I really like it alot!! Great job! :)
     
  7. deram_scholzara

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    Thank you, all of you.
     

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