Verbs & Nouns Stabbing & Stabbing Each Other A poem by Wolf Larsen I kiss the verbs and I caress the nouns and I lovingly touch the adjectives, I hammer and crash and build the entire world into a poem, earthquakes roar out of my pen, wars lunge out of my eyes Copyright 2004 by Wolf Larsen (First Published in Seventh Quarry magazine, United Kingdom)
The only problem I see in it, and correct me if I'm wrong.. is that you left out adverbs... seems it would open your poem up more if you had some, but maybe you left them out intentionally... hmmm...
