The Poet kisses the reader

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by WolfLarsen, Dec 16, 2006.

  1. WolfLarsen

    WolfLarsen Member

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    Verbs & Nouns Stabbing & Stabbing Each Other
    A poem by Wolf Larsen


    I kiss the verbs and I caress the nouns and I lovingly touch the adjectives, I hammer and crash and build the entire world into a poem, earthquakes roar out of my pen, wars lunge out of my eyes



    Copyright 2004 by Wolf Larsen



    (First Published in Seventh Quarry magazine, United Kingdom)
     
  2. andallthatstocome

    andallthatstocome not a squid

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    wow... very violent... effective, different, one wouldn't normally think of words as warriors
     
  3. WolfLarsen

    WolfLarsen Member

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    Thank you!

    Cheers & happy new year!

    Wolf Larsen
     
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  5. deram_scholzara

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    The only problem I see in it, and correct me if I'm wrong.. is that you left out adverbs... seems it would open your poem up more if you had some, but maybe you left them out intentionally... hmmm...
     
  6. Caelynn

    Caelynn Yellow Butterfly

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    very powerful words.
     

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