i wish i could ask you the questions you dont want to hear i wish you could give me the answers that i want to hear you know the questions and i know the answers but i can't help but feeling there must be another way the truth hurts too much there must be another way i've never let the truth hurt this much before but now i cant bear it you fucked up my mind but you didn't mean it you broke my heart but you didnt even know it how could i feel this way and you dont even sense it is my life set up for purgatory will i be in limbo all this time is there someone to save me is there anybody there i thought it was you but you didnt even know I've never really been one to write much. After discovering that a girl I care very much about was with another guy I felt the need to write and just started and this is what came out.
unrequited love, hurts like hell. it kills you everyday and nobody knows it but you be well soon __________________ Australian Job Listing
a fantastic representation of the feeling of betrayal in relationships. You express it very well and intensely. I can't help thinking that if it were shorter, though, that the poem would show more of the brisk sternness of just wanting to smack the person to their senses... something that should obviously never be done, but you can't help the feeling of it.
Oh my god this poem. Is amazing. Im feeling the same way right now. It does hurt.. A lot... And I wish I was able to just tell him how much he hurt me. But I cant... :/ Beautiful poem by the way. :]
I really don't feel like she betrayed me though even though it may seem that way from what I wrote. She has no loyalty to me. Were not together and never have been. As far as I know she doesnt even know how I feel about her. It was just the thought and sight of her with someone else that made me write this.
