"I am not your idea of me."

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by wildflowerlove, Dec 31, 2006.

  1. wildflowerlove

    wildflowerlove Member

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    ♥ ♥ ♥ I am not your idea of me.
    I am more than simply a name;
    more than the one thousand
    faces you mask me with.
    When I love it is passionate.
    To love deeply is to love vulnerably.
    To be vulnerable is to surrender.
    I will surrender.
    ♥ ♥ ♥I am not your idea of me.
    I am an eccentric hippie,
    sliently digging deeper to this compassionate core.
    I am an artist,
    a creater of my perceptual reality.
    ♥ ♥ ♥I am not your idea of me.
    I am a lover of nature,
    an admirer of its beauty.
    I am a lover of introverted wisdom,
    of silent wisdom,
    quietly emanating within myself.
    ♥ ♥ ♥I am not your idea of me.
    I will not be shamed by this salt,
    this "holy water,"
    for it brings these barriers to surface.
    I am making these walls
    into velvet petals.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Very graceful....

    my favorite stanza:

    I will not be shamed by this salt,
    this "holy water,"
    for it brings these barriers to surface.
    I am making these walls
    into velvet petals.
     
  3. cantsmokenomore

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  4. Justagrrl420

    Justagrrl420 Member

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    eloquently written..i like the whole thing..i can't pick a favorite part
     
  5. Flyinglilypad

    Flyinglilypad Member

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    I like it. Its a very eloquent way to describe yourself.
     
  6. Black Jim

    Black Jim Banned

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    "of silent wisdom"

    and the true Poets know justice is a lie.
     
  7. kwal30

    kwal30 Member

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    I've recently had a revelation that made me realize this very same thing.

    Very nice poem.
     
  8. wildflowerlove

    wildflowerlove Member

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    Thanks you all. It feels good to share. I rarely write poems and the ones I've written have been a while back ago. This makes me more inspired.

    Wildflowerlove
     

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